Essay help

April 2nd, 2007 by gloomer.

Hello, My name is Jeremiah Walker and I want to apply for the Peace Corps. To this end, I would like to get some help from everyone in this community with my application essays. I will upload them here.

Essay 1

Essay 2 Thank you for all of your help.

~Jeremiah Walker

4 Responses to “ Essay help”

  1. Michael Says:

    Your essays seem to get the point across. It would be difficult to speak for you, only you know your motivations, reasons, and experiences. If they say everything you want to say, I’d go ahead and submit them.

    Except one thing … make sure you spell Peace Corps correctly. They might notice that. ;-)

  2. Cris Says:

    The best approach to your essays is to speak from your heart. I think you’re doing that, and are on the right track. Hang in there: the process is long, but well worth it and very exhilarating when you move up to the next level.

  3. Jerry W Says:

    I will be turning my essay in tomorrow. Thank you for your help.

    ~Jeremiah

  4. Amanda Says:

    Hmm… that was a long essay. Shouldn’t it only be 500 words?

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